sudz_amigo

Over all you have conveyed the m.c's(sorry I forgot the name!) emotions of excitement and genuine happiness on leaving middle school quite well,but I think you can polish the first ...

Heyy!!It's Tuesday and you haven't posted the next part yet! >_< Lol!Just kidding! As you might have noticed I'm a biggggggggg fan of your work because Ive been sort of ...

Heyy!!! Good going there! I just love how sardonically Ella looks down upon her family! The way you wrote it-just awesome! They did their duty and said all the things ...

Heyy..Welcome to YWS!I'm sure you will love it here!! Really loved how you did all this..but there is a rule on YWS that you have to review at least 2 ...

Heya!!Me here!! I wanted to review this thing right from chapter 1 but...i htought i'd do it later not in the middle of my exams,but on reading this chapter I ...

Oh....well I'm really confused right now!! Some people are saying it rhymes too much and some people that it isn't rhyming properly!! I'm really confused !! By the way..thanks cris,fun4eva ...

Thank you!

Wow!!Really amazing!Smashing!Superb!Fantastic! Did I mention I liked this story?!! What I really liked about your story was that you described to the readers what was happening next door and at ...

WOW! Totally amazing! I tried to draw something like this before,but the result was......well i'd better not think about it especially after seeing your sketch!! But I have to tell ...

I know you'll never read this. I know that I'll probably never tell you . Nice beginning! Could it be that we are components to a cliche, running blind in ...

Heyy!nice poem!You've described the emotions pretty well!! I see a couple of mistakes though..I'm pointing them out,don't mind! A little(FEW) more sleepless nights and little(A FEW) more fright filled

Thanks Jannie!! :D

Thanks a lot for the reviews matt,writer_ally and lord anzius!!I have re-written the poem keeping in mind what yuhave suggsted(i tried to anyway!).How do you like the poem now?

Rain Oh wonderful rain, How I love thee! Sitting in the house all day Watching people on the roads flee. Some people don't like to be Cooped up inside and ...

Disturbia-Rihanna