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Re: The Strange and Exciting Life of Daniel Romis (Part One)
For starters, Hello! I'm subtlepseudonym... or just subtle. Just as a disclaimer, all grammar edits are subject to my fallacies and any suggestions of alteration to your story derive themselves ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Road to Hell
Before I begin, I'd like to say that the premise of your story is great, though I'm going to tear it apart in an effort to improve your writing. So, ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Arachnophobia
Though I find the prospect of a new member reviewing the well-written work of an administrator entertaining, I'll submit to humor. I thought the poem was great, especially the subtle ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Grace Happens (1)
Hello there! Thought I'd oblige you and tear your work to shreds. While reading, I found myself frequently going back a sentence or two to reread as it was a ...
Feb 25, 2011
