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  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Escape

    Thanks for the review! It's always a gratifying experience to find a reader who shares my enthusiasm for science fiction. Glad you liked the story and I'll take a look ...

    Jul 26, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Escape

    Hello good folks of YWS! I've been rather inactive on the forum lately, though I've also been working feverishly at this short story. I recently finished it a few weeks ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Strange and Exciting Life of Daniel Romis (Part One)

    For starters, Hello! I'm subtlepseudonym... or just subtle. Just as a disclaimer, all grammar edits are subject to my fallacies and any suggestions of alteration to your story derive themselves ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Home

    I've been working on this particular story for a few weeks now, often to no avail. This does happen to be the end of the story and I am currently ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Road to Hell

    Before I begin, I'd like to say that the premise of your story is great, though I'm going to tear it apart in an effort to improve your writing. So, ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Arachnophobia

    Though I find the prospect of a new member reviewing the well-written work of an administrator entertaining, I'll submit to humor. I thought the poem was great, especially the subtle ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Name finding tips

    One method I use is basing names directly from words that describe the character, but are in a different language. From there you may have to get a little creative ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Escape

    So this is my first submission to the Young Writer's Society and I wrote it up in a few hours while doing some other stuff on the computer. It wasn't ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Grace Happens (1)

    Hello there! Thought I'd oblige you and tear your work to shreds. While reading, I found myself frequently going back a sentence or two to reread as it was a ...

    Feb 25, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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