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Oh wow, I didn't even know you could do that! Thank you everyone so far for the critiques, it's been really helpful. I'm going to keep working on this poem, ...

I re-did some things without the repetition. Critique this one! There’s this flower I’ve seen, Beautiful in every way. Full of blues, greens, golds, and grey. It blossoms one color ...

Hmm.. yeah.. I'm starting to think I should give up on the repetition thing for a while. I can't seem to make it work.. maybe I'll re-write the poem without ...

I was thinking about this poem again. I wanted to add a little more to it, a last third stanza. The punctuation doesn't match the first stanza but I'm not ...

Oh.. I was experimenting with structure, that repetition was my idea for writing this. The end of one stanza is supposed to carry into the beginning of the next. Is ...

Oh! chapter 1! I didn't see that when I posted the first comment, but I want to add comments about the second chapter. XD I think the writing in this ...

thank you :) I always write in some kind of rhyme pattern, it feels more poetic to me most of the time. The entire second verse was very forced, I ...