streetwalker

reversed rewind in a world filled with distrust, we must still dare to believe. - michael jackson I slid into the backseat of a cab and drummed my fingers on ...

i agree with the comment above - you changed tenses a few times but that can be changed if you review the story again. in my opinion, the story seems ...

thank you for reading my work! i'll definitely see if i can further revise the first paragraph if it's a wee bit generic for some people's tastes. thank you again, ...

I shivered as another gust of October wind blew down the street. People were struggling to keep their umbrellas from upturning and folding their warm coats around their cold bodies. ...

This is so interesting, especially how Java is dealing with her mother's death. It's confusing as well in parts but I'm sure it all will become clear soon enough :) ...