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Re: Woman of the City
Hi, I really liked your piece. I really love books about NYC from some reason. They really attract me. I Loved everything. I liked how you described the lady. I ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: pinky swears and big mistakes.
Hello, I am also new to YWS. I really liked your story. It is so true about secrets and pinky swears. The only 100% way that your sure that no ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: In the Deep Blue - Prologue (Edited)
Wow, Your story left me in tears. I love it. It was amazing. I have never read anything like this before. Very well done. I didn't see anything wrong. I ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: snow
Hi, This poem was very short. I liked it though. I liked the way you described it. You could write more to it, make it longer. You could do so ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: The Hardest Part is Moving On
Hi, I like it. It needs a little work though. Run through your spell check. Also the character seems a little fake. The writing style isn't very good. It seems ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Violet, Let me explain
Hi, I like it so far. There is not much to read though. Not much info. I don't think there is enough there to get where you are coming from. ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Strawberry Wine
Hi, I love your story idea. Strawberry wine is my favorite song in the whole and I have always wondered what it would be like if it was made into ...
Mar 9, 2008