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Re: Egg - 1500 words
The premise of this story really made me interested at a first glance. I really like the concept of a main character who lied so much, they are no longer ...
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Re: The Scorn of a Mother Hen
This poem was very enjoyable to read! I love all the works about chickens lately. The part that says 'sacred ground' is really funny and puts a clear contrast between ...
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Re: The Carpet Shop
Wow, a very interesting dream! The premise was really gripping to me. If you were up for it, I'd love to see this dream turned into an actual story. I'm ...
Feb 6, 2023 -
Re: Are you happy?
The first thing that stood out to me about this piece was the title. I think that titles with questions in them usually catch my attention, and that beginning also ...
Feb 6, 2023 -
Re: Dear friend, hear my tune!
This piece was so gripping and mysterious! I especially liked the beginning. It immediately made me want to read more. These lines really made me feel a lot of emotion: ...
Feb 6, 2023
