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  • Script » General, General
    Re: Monster

    All right., Since you're alone in the Script section, here for a quickie., :D Nothing much to review though., you did a great job., :) But it bothered me how ...

    Apr 27, 2014

  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Our Call..!

    Hi Shivam., :) Steward here for a review., I usually just read and point out stuff in order of the story., Please note that everything I say are just my ...

    Apr 27, 2014

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor
    Re: Don't Trust the Damsels

    Hiya Caylleen., :) Here to review ya., :D Not like I would really attack him. That would just ruin my image. Not sure if this is right., but I'll let ...

    Apr 24, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Re: The animals we are

    Heyahey., :D So I'ma read cuz' it's what I like doing., ;) Don't take my opinions seriously, cuz' they're from me., xD First, Wondering why this is our lives Grammar ...

    Mar 22, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: His Legacy - Chapter 1

    Hiya Faithless., It's me again., :D Here for chapter 2 of His Legacy (obviously)., Don't take my review seriously, I'm just thinking out loud., xD So first, We ambled along, ...

    Mar 14, 2014

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic
    Re: Hunger Games Fanfic: Odesta short story

    Hiya, this just got my attention., :) I love the hunger games.!, :D I'll go ahead and read., ;) ...enough to have we feet caressed by the waves every second. ...

    Mar 11, 2014

  • Poetry » Other, Humor
    Re: Dreams

    Okay, so I'll read., :P Schools should shift from a nine month school year to year-round schooling Okay, so you're the kind of guy who loves school, huh? Haha., :) ...

    Mar 10, 2014

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction
    Re: Weeping Angels

    Hiya, here to read., :) I suck, you rock, we'll get through with luck., :D Okay, so here's the cheese, I read and tell you what I feel while reading., ...

    Mar 10, 2014

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: Fear/Blue Eyes

    Hiya, Steward here to read your awesome piece of work., :D I suck, you rock, we'll get through with just pure luck., I'll just read and tell you what I ...

    Mar 9, 2014

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Oblivious Heart

    Ok, here is me., :D I'll just go ahead and read while picking up typos., :) That old hag is trying to exert her vengeance on be because she hit ...

    Mar 8, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Saving Kelsea Ch. I

    Hiya., :) Steward hear to speak, (not point out you errors, seeing someone already did that)., As I read this, some stuff bothered me., :) "Let's hope I can get ...

    Mar 7, 2014

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Culture
    Re: Beware of the Malaceth.

    So, hey., :) Good work on this poem., reminded me of Skyrim., :D Like Sunshine101 said though, awkward moment on 'grips his pointed teeth'., Rhiasofia also pointed out them obvious ...

    Mar 7, 2014

  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: what doesn't kill you

    Hiya, so first work on YWS, right? Okaaay., So not much to say here, but... Uhm, the story was great., :) but the thing is that it's pretty hard to ...

    Mar 7, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Taking Back The Strip

    Okay, I'm here for obvious errors, cause I suck at digging in., :) “Legate, You asked for me?” So, the capital letter 'Y' on 'You'., :) The Legate stood in ...

    Mar 7, 2014

  • Other » Theatre, General
    Re: A Blind Affair

    Ok, so here I stumbled from nowhere., :) As I was reading, my eyes were stuck to some obvious mistakes: Alice: Oh! What happen? Are you all right? It should ...

    Mar 6, 2014


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