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Oh man, all of these are pretty good! Why are phone conversations so weird? A paradox, it is... LOL, a scavenger hunt? That's a good one. Or you could be ...

Every single Friday lately, because I write articles online and it's a tedious process. Then, once I have time to actually do some of my creative writing, I'm sick of ...

I really like how short but vivid this poem is. The title, "Vestiges," compliments this quite well too; success and failures, and wondering of those things, brings about traces and ...

Awesome to see something a bit on the lighter side, I like to see randomness at times and this was definitely it! Could totally see this becoming a song sung ...

Thanks for the review! I agree about the flow and where everything should go, it felt somewhat awkward even when I read it and had to turn it in. Perhaps ...

This is an oldie! We read Canterbury Tales in English Honors during my senior year of high school and the teacher challenged us to create our own character in poem ...

I have a friend who needs constant feedback/reassurance/social time. It's almost copious amounts, like a social crackhead. However, he's horribly silent on the phone. It makes it very awkward. He ...

I absolutely love the first part of this poem, it really sets up the mood and imagery quite nicely. The reader can easily get swept up in many feel-good emotions ...

Dear HBGirl4ever. Starting every line of a poem with a capital letter is for amateurs and hacks. there's something called poetic license, that states any poet may do whatever the ...

8/10. It reminds me Sunkist...And now I want one. Kudos, RazHuni. lol.

Very nice, kept me intrigued until the end. I've love to see more added--maybe finally realizing that dream of going to Europe or hitting a snag along the way? I ...

Yeah, the flow of the poem is kinda ... weird. I do agree. Lol. This was originally intended as a homage piece, or a poem to praise cats, but it ...

Random little poem I did in-between essays for school last semester (and revised a bit recently). This is for you, fearless adventurer Who often finds perilous journeys in my closet ...

Huge potential here indeed. Delving in the duality of the reality and mind is limitless and could put to rest any questions readers might have of the narrator and the ...

I noticed that the 'word of the week' is dilapidated, which made me laugh. My boyfriend is what I call common sense dense--he can do super hard math problems no ...