starlight88

Good beat and rythym. Flowing. Emotion well expressed. Not enough details. Readers want lots of details to keep them interested. We pretty much want a learning experience other than school.

OMG, this was so funny! I bet you got your inspiration from the book about how the wolf had to go get sugar for his dear old granny and had ...

Those were very funny. I'm not a video game fanatic, so I don't know much about Eragon or Zelda, but you made the stories very original and creative. Good job.

Death is a tough subject to tackle, whether it's by means of writing fiction or dealing with it in real life. In order to write a compelling story about death, ...