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Re: Hazel- chapter 1
If you're trying to write a story about a princess that already exists it would be a parody. A parody is something that already exists that you changed up a ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Are You In? *Edited*
I guess I can see what you're saying now. But you may want to clear that up just a little bit, because yeah it is a bit confusing.
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Life is a Journey
Thanks guys. I didn't really like poetry last year but ever since I've been in Advanced Creative Writing I'm starting to feel something with it. I'm just a beginner so ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Insomniac
What exactly is this? It sounds like an adverstisement to me. Was it like a school project or something? I guess you're entitled to post anything you want, but what ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Workin' A Smile
This poem reminds me of Twilight in a way. I saw a lot of use of personification in it. And since Twilight is so popular, I'm sure this could be ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Crazy
This poem is so true. People are considered crazy when they're different, and it's sad. Sometimes they really are, but sometimes they aren't. I loved the poem and I hope ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Then You Were Gone
That was beautiful. I can tell you're a more experienced writer. I'm not too good at poetry, but I could tell you are. I hope to read some of your ...
Aug 24, 2010
