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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hazel- chapter 1

    If you're trying to write a story about a princess that already exists it would be a parody. A parody is something that already exists that you changed up a ...

    Nov 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Are You In? *Edited*

    I guess I can see what you're saying now. But you may want to clear that up just a little bit, because yeah it is a bit confusing.

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life is a Journey

    Thanks guys. I didn't really like poetry last year but ever since I've been in Advanced Creative Writing I'm starting to feel something with it. I'm just a beginner so ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Insomniac

    What exactly is this? It sounds like an adverstisement to me. Was it like a school project or something? I guess you're entitled to post anything you want, but what ...

    Sep 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Workin' A Smile

    This poem reminds me of Twilight in a way. I saw a lot of use of personification in it. And since Twilight is so popular, I'm sure this could be ...

    Aug 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Crazy

    This poem is so true. People are considered crazy when they're different, and it's sad. Sometimes they really are, but sometimes they aren't. I loved the poem and I hope ...

    Aug 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Then You Were Gone

    That was beautiful. I can tell you're a more experienced writer. I'm not too good at poetry, but I could tell you are. I hope to read some of your ...

    Aug 24, 2010


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