stargazer9927

Those were awesome. My favorite was the candy one. Was that a floor or something? It looked real and it was kind of weird that the foot was on it. ...

I'm not a romance writer, but this idea came to me and I just couldn't ignore it. It was originally supossed to be a short story but it ended up ...

It's a great start. My problem when I read novels is that I'm very picky. I feel that if I'm going to sit there for ten to twenty minutes reading ...

Nice. It's not that long, but it sure got my attention. I think you could make this into something more. It's definitely a good start. Unless you intended to keep ...

The continuation of the forward. As a little recap two people by the name of Emma and Richard who were married had a baby together in the year 1796 and ...

I thought this sounded very interesting, but it could use a lot of work. The number one thing that bothered me were all the grammer mistakes. When you get the ...

I really like this poem. It's so true! But I think you can do a little more with it. I don't really know how to explain it. It just seems ...

There's a place under poetry that talks about poems that tell a story. I know because I just recently posted a ballad. Just go to read/write, sumit your work, and ...

That was such a cute story and I loved it. It was definitely entertaining enough. Grammar is my biggest pet peeve. You didn't have too big of a problem with ...

I loved that post. I believe that he died for me too, so it was fun to read. You don't see much of that on here. But just one question, ...

That's really cool. Is that you or someone you know? Because if you took that yourself you did an amazing job on capturing the light and making it look awesome ...

Going back through some old stuff is always fun isn't it? I'm changing this up a bit and hopefully I caught some grammar mistakes. I got a lot of good ...

This poem reminds me of Twilight in a way. I saw a lot of use of personification in it. And since Twilight is so popular, I'm sure this could be ...

This poem is so true. People are considered crazy when they're different, and it's sad. Sometimes they really are, but sometimes they aren't. I loved the poem and I hope ...

That was beautiful. I can tell you're a more experienced writer. I'm not too good at poetry, but I could tell you are. I hope to read some of your ...