stargazer9927

I love the creativity in this short story and the lauguage that's used. The idea was great and you did a great job with developing it. As far as grammer ...

I think it's a very cool story and has a lot of detail to it. But I'm having a hard time seeing it as a short story. I think this ...

Chapter Three Part Two “I'd like to call this meeting to order,” the lady said with a big, booming voice. “I'm Martha Jones, and I'm the head witch of all ...

This was quite interesting, but I liked it. It really brings to my attention all the bully problems and some people out there that sadly just don't have any friends. ...

This was a really good piece. But I'm not really sure if it was supposed to be a story or a little clip of a story. Or maybe just a ...

Chapter Three I woke up completely frozen. I was really surprised I slept through the night because I could feel a huge neck ack. I really missed my warm and ...

Okay so if this kid is supposed to be a third grader why does he sound so much like a Junior High schoolar? When I was in third grade we ...

That was cute. But the girl must have been a really big nerd. But I'm not one to be talking because all my friends are nerds. I'm a nerd but ...

Okay the first thing I would like to say is I think you're an amazing writer. Your word use and just the way you write is so professional and amazing. ...

What exactly is this? It sounds like an adverstisement to me. Was it like a school project or something? I guess you're entitled to post anything you want, but what ...

This is the second part to Someday. This won't make much sense if you don't read the first part, so I suggest you do that first. I'm really proud of ...

Well first of all to answer your question yes I think this is going somewhere and you should write more. But I can also see that it needs a lot ...

I'm not a huge fan of poetry because I think people over do it to the point where I can't really understand it. I like the type of poetry that's ...

This is the third installment of my novel Ice Cold Fire. Once again, I suggest you read the forward and chapter one first. Now I already know that my history ...

I liked it. It was the type of poetry that I can understand and really like. I don't like commenting on poetry, because I personally don't think I know anything ...