stargazer9927

This is something I wrote for my AP English class and I had to submit to this website that gave you a critique. I was all worried about it and ...

I guess I can see what you're saying now. But you may want to clear that up just a little bit, because yeah it is a bit confusing.

I thought it was a well put together and thought out story and you did a great job with putting yourself in this girl's shoes. But I think you jumped ...

This book is very interesting. I like to write about average people facing hard problems too, even more than I like to write fantasy. It seems like fantasy, science fiction, ...

I'm not a huge fan of Twilight (I read the first two and a half books and then I was ready to drop dead from bordom) but I think this ...

Okay so I was glancing over my stuff I've submitted and I realized I had all novels and poetry. I have tons of short stories that I need to post! ...

I think it sounds like a fairly interesting story. But why did you change perpectives after the introduction? I guess I understand it was just the introduction so you put ...

It doesn't sound like you wrote it late at night. I like it. And it doesn't really sound emo. All teenagers want to vanish off the face of the earth ...

Luckily I didn't have to, because when I turned around I saw her standing right next to me. “Whoa, how...never mind.” I was tired of asking her unanswerable questions. “So ...

Okay I'm sure you're tired of hearing from me by now, but this is the last one I promise. If I would have known you had all of it in ...

Wow this was even better than the Prologue. But might I suggest getting rid of either the prologue or the first part of this story because there's no point in ...

I hate commenting on recent additions all the time because I know it drives me nuts when I get a couple of comments when I first post it and then ...

Thanks guys. I didn't really like poetry last year but ever since I've been in Advanced Creative Writing I'm starting to feel something with it. I'm just a beginner so ...

I'm not much of the poetry writer, but I was really proud of this one. It's called a Rondel for those of you who want to know. I hope you ...

I love them. I don't think they're amature. My favorite is the one at the very bottom with the rain drops on it. You either took it right after it ...