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Thanks. I wasn't trying to make it sound like I had low self-esteem though. I just tend to compare myself to others a lot. I know that's not good, but ...

I wrote this back in November, and now I'm looking over it again. I had one of my friends edit it (she's insanely good at it) and I fixed a ...

Hey it's me again. Once again I loved it. I'm still curious on why it's called The Black Rose though. But I suppose I'll find out over time. I only ...

I love it. You did a great job with describing what was going on, I felt like I was really there. I know it's just the first part, so we ...

I think any review you're going to get for this is going to be sexist. I'm not going to tell you my opinion of it because I'm a girl and ...

Hi Bubblegirl, it's me again. I'll be honest, I didn't really like part two. Like I said, I found Twilight really boring and that part reminded me completely of Twilight. ...

Oh and by the way, Rayneisthename, this type of poem is actually called an Ottava Rima. You start with eight syllables and then take one away each time, eventually going ...

What I meant by knobs is door knobs, you know because the person has to work and turning doornobs is my idea of her working because she's moving alot? And ...

Wow great job. I was literally on the edge of my chair, feeling really scared. I've also heard a story like this. But it was just with one lady and ...

When one thinks of a long summer’s day They often think of no work And nothing but play Now everyone can shirk It’s nothing like the beginning of May Once ...

Ha, ha. You already figured it out. That makes it so much easier.

You would probably think that because of how the media uses a parody. Like Weird Al or Vietaman Princess. Those are parodys, but they're only a form of them. Your ...

Okay that helped clear a lot of things up:) But I still say you need to attach them together. I'm torn with the parody thing. Because it sounds a little ...

If you're trying to write a story about a princess that already exists it would be a parody. A parody is something that already exists that you changed up a ...

Okay first things first. "and princesses never cut their hair." Missed a capital " It's probably enchanted." Hazel thought. You put an extra space there "I shall treat her like ...