stargazer9927

Okay so I've written lyric poetry before but I've never submitted any to this site. I've never really thought any of my poetry was good enough but I just barely ...

Continued from The Dark Curse Pt 1 Part Two That night at dinner it was completely silent. I didn't think I have ever seen Austin so quiet. Finally my mom ...

The only problem I'm finding with them is you can't really see them because they're so big. Might I suggest shrinking them down a little so they can be easily ...

Beautiful. I only wish I could have that kind of artistic talent. I think the next step with this would be to do some shading. And I don't think it ...

Make the writing sound like you. Don't try to impress people and know what criticism is good for you and which you know isn't right. Everyone has their own writing ...

Thanks guys. Yeah I know I have issues with comma use. It's something I'm trying to work on. Thanks for all the tips. I'll have to go through it when ...

Well I did like that the story was easy to read and interesting enough for me to actual read it. I have a very select taste when I read things ...

Part Three It felt like I slept forever. When I woke up I was sure I had slept through my alarm clock. I forced my eyes open and went to ...

Is there like another part to this story? I was confused on what was going on and there was a ton that you left out. Are you planning on doing ...

I think the idea is good, although I don't know if I liked all the swearing. But I understand it was part of your character. I can't say I like ...

Thanks guys. I haven't done any art recently but I think I just might do something. Oh and Roal, that was actually a penny:)

Wow, great job. I'm impressed and I didn't notice anything off. And cute pictures. I love the things you chose to draw.

This is the very first art upload and I've discovered how particular Young Writers Society is about the attachments. It took me forever just to upload them. Now I'm not ...

They were all amazing. Humans aren't my thing when it comes to drawing, but you did a great job with your fairies. Wait, when you said Vernon, what state was ...

I love this. It's so true. I remember when I was innocent and still in my box. I'm still in the process of getting out of it. I think you ...