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Re: Paint (Chapter 2)
Okay, first things first. You can post this in the novel section and then edit the novel info. Then the entire novel will all be chained together and it will ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
I loved this! I can't really think of anything negative to say about it! It's so true:)
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Frienimies
Might I just say you guys are extremely smart and I wasn't expecting you to pick up on the fact that it was a true story. But yes, it is ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Forgotton
I'm debating on how I'm going to review this, because I don't usually review things like this. I thought it was a good story and very well written. It was ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Kitten drawing
Having no artistic talent of my own I will give you my opinion, not necessary knowing what I'm doing. Is this scratch art? If it is than you did a ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Frienimies
Cassidy and I are frienimies. I first met her sophomore year, the same year I met Tyler (just a little later), and from the beginning I was super jealous of ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Light the Torches
What exactly is the purpose to this song? I think it's a beautiful song and you are an amazing poetry writer, but what exactly is lighting the torches? I feel ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: What Would You Say?
Nice poem. It flows nicely and it just sounds great. There were only two parts I thought could be edited: Until it nipped the very sky… and What would you ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Thirty Four Year Old Child
Beautiful! I can think of tons of people I've met and seen that fall into this scenario. It's kind of a sad story though. This reminds me a lot of ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Jerk
I really liked this. It's what I wish I could say to some people but don't have the heart to do it. I would have to agree with the review ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: What I Want.
You know there is a such thing as flash fiction. It's a story with under fifty words. This might come close to something like that, although I'm not quite sure ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Every Time
Sad poem. But very well written. If there was one thing I want to say it would be it's not really narrative poetry because it kind of tells a story ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Never Give Up On Love (Rainy Day)
I'm not a song writer, but I do everything when it comes to writing so I've written a few songs. This is my personal best. I'm just re-posting it in ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: My Story (As a Ball of Yarn)
I was looking through all my old writing and I came across this. It was originally just a prompt for my creative writing class but looking back on it I ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Cherry Blossoms and my puppy!
Adorable! I loved the puppy and yeah I'm glad you mentioned he was sleeping under the tire. Just be careful when you backed out:) The first one was also cool. ...
Apr 18, 2011
