stargazer9927

I wrote this at the beginning of this year, and I'm happy to say my poetry writing has improved since then. I did almost ten reviews for review day (and ...

Beautiful poem. I could really feel some of your emotions into this, as if it had actually happened to you personally. I only caught one mistake: Your a traitor This ...

I love the plot line of this. I have a close family member with this condition so I can totally relate to it. Although he acts a bit different than ...

First things first. I have to say this to a lot of the younger people, but remember to click on the "story" button at the bottom of the page when ...

That's kind of cool that you were able to do that with just six words. Perhaps I should try this:) I think it was a great poem, but I would ...

Might I just say I love your writing. You have that good writing that I actually want to read and doesn't bore me to death. I only found a few ...

I love the fact that you added a poem to explain your story. That's very creative! I don't think I've ever seen anyone do that before. But then when I ...

I've never read any of your chapters before this but I'll go ahead and review this anyway because I caught on to what was going on pretty fast. The main ...

Okay, first things first: you need to click on the "story" format when you post it so that it won't look like a big clump of text and will be ...

I'm having a hard time seeing the rhyme scheme. But I do think it's a wonderful poem and I personally don't think you should take the parts in the green ...

If I might just make a suggestion. I'm not sure what contest this was for and maybe it had to be in a certain format for that contest but in ...

This was beautiful! And I think a lot more people can relate to it than you would think, even if they don't realize it. You're truly an amazing poetry writer. ...

I loved the story line! This is the kind of stuff I love to read about, rather than fantasy and other things that couldn't really happen. I noticed a lot ...

I can give you some tips on how you should divide your stanzas. There's a lump in my throat that just won't go Away No matter how much I pray ...

Hi! I've come to review part three. I'm following you now in case you didn't know that so I'll get the chance to read the entire novel. You could say ...