stargazer9927

I thought this was well written and I found it funny they could manipulate the man:) The one thing that bothered me as I was reading this was they seemed ...

This was a cute story, but kind of sad. I've never read any of your other chapters (or even know what this novel is about for that matter) but from ...

I loved this story! It had me completely engaged! You have quite the imagination and this story was amazing well thought out and written. I'm also surprised no one has ...

I thought it was funny and a great idea but it didn't seem much like a poem. You need to make it flow a bit more and add some stanzas. ...

Beautiful poem. There's so much imagery in it and I could really feel her motion and see what was happening. I didn't really like the style. You didn't seem to ...

I think this is very interesting but I must say it doesn't seem very "poetic" to me. It just seemed like you rambling about where you were at. Perhaps you ...

This is such a sad story. I'm not sure how to review this. It's always hard for me to read stories about abuse. At first I was thinking you might ...

Hello. I'm finally here to review. So I think I disagree with the other two reviews. This does sound like a poem but I think you need to make it ...

I'm finally here to review:) I' ve been busy all week and then a couple days ago I figured I would wait until review day. This story is so creative! ...

I wrote this many years ago, and my song writing has improved since then. I realize there's a lot of spots that sound weird, and those were all courtesy of ...

Great use of detail! And I loved your writing style. I just wanted to say lighten up a little and calm down. I'm sure whatever story this is was great. ...

What time period is this in? I am sixteen, and I am to marry Aydan Everny tomorrow. I was taken back by that line and wondered if this was supposed ...

This was such a cute story. I always laughed at upperclassmen dating freshman and I said a high school sweetheart marrige would never last (and I'm not denying that) but ...

Well I'm sad you're not going to finish it, but I don't think you can delete it because it has comments attached. You can, however, edit it and change it ...

Muffin:)