stargazer9927

Red = Grammar errors Blue = My comments Green [Comma] = Comma needs to be there I knew it was going to be an unsual day when my mom came ...

I'm actually writing four novels right now, but none of them are finished. I also have three novels I started but then never finished because they were my earlier work. ...

This was beautiful. This was actually a dream or did you just have a dream and this came to you? Either way it was so powerful and I could feel ...

I far from care what people think, but that doesn't mean I don't want an opinion on it outside of myself. Even if everyone told me it was a stupid ...

The URL is That's the best I can do because I don't know how to get it as a link:)

Thanks! Your comments were much appriciated. And I'll be sure to remember that next time I need to post something.

How do you post a topic ID? I have a poem called A Couple's Love and another one called How I Became King that I would like reviewed but I ...

Do you do parts of novels? I have a fantasy novel that I would like reviewed but the forward is already reviewed it's chapter three I need. Do you take ...

I would have to agree with the review before me. This was a very well thought out story and you did ten times better than I could have done with ...

Okay so I know famous people are overdone in the media right now (especially after Hannah Montana) but my story's a bit different and I want some feedback whether or ...

Oh and I know I suck at emotion. I had someone else tell me that when I first posted too and I asked them what they thought I should do ...

Thank you! I actually wrote this A LONG time ago so I'm sorry about the grammar. You won't see things like that in my newer stuff. This was a novel ...

I have no reveiw for you but I just want to say if you hate Algebra wait until you get higher up. I took Calculus last year and I suck ...

I loved this! I think it's the best fanfiction novel I've ever read! I love Harry Potter and this not only stuck with the same characters but it was halarious. ...

I think this was a great idea and you certainly have quite the imagination. Okay, nit picks first: Mother’s last words were “I love you” and the last she would ...