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Re: The Long Journey Chapters 1 and 2
No. The dialogue would have to be uninterrupted (it must be the same character talking without any pauses for action/dialogue tags/anything else of the sort that would not be in ...
May 17, 2020 -
Re: The Long Journey Chapters 1 and 2
Yes. However, if a character is retelling a story (most common reason why) or it is a very large piece of dialogue, you would split it into two (or more) ...
May 17, 2020 -
Re: The View from the Window of a Silent House
Thanks for the review. I didn't know that these things were unclear to the reader. I did mention in the story that the narrator lived next door to Chiara and ...
May 15, 2020 -
Re: noise
Hello! Thank you for reviewing my writing! I'll answer some of your questions. Paragraph 1- You kind of cut off here, but I think that you were writing a compliment. ...
May 25, 2019 -
Re: The Flavors of Life
Thank you!
Mar 22, 2019 -
Re: The Flavors of Life
Thank you!
Mar 22, 2019
