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  • Novel / Chapter » Health, General Re: The Long Journey Chapters 1 and 2

    No. The dialogue would have to be uninterrupted (it must be the same character talking without any pauses for action/dialogue tags/anything else of the sort that would not be in ...

    May 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Health, General Re: The Long Journey Chapters 1 and 2

    Yes. However, if a character is retelling a story (most common reason why) or it is a very large piece of dialogue, you would split it into two (or more) ...

    May 17, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: The View from the Window of a Silent House

    Thanks for the review. I didn't know that these things were unclear to the reader. I did mention in the story that the narrator lived next door to Chiara and ...

    May 15, 2020
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: noise

    Hello! Thank you for reviewing my writing! I'll answer some of your questions. Paragraph 1- You kind of cut off here, but I think that you were writing a compliment. ...

    May 25, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flavors of Life

    Thank you!

    Mar 22, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flavors of Life

    Thank you!

    Mar 22, 2019


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