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i am trying to think of titles but it is hard. maybe lost, What I Had, or Longing? i don't really know but i am still going to try.

this poem is sad but true. a poem that is of a girl fallen in love with the wrong person. it is a poem i will remember, and one i ...

Every moment in time Every hour Every second Is special We try and capture everything Some ones first step A birthday party We can't remeber everything So we take a ...

I realy like this poem and how u started it with the same line for every verse. i really hope to read more of your poems. :D

i realy like this poem and, it makes me kinda sad. but it still is one of the best poems i have read today

i realy like this poem. Honestly this is my favorite poem of the day!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have a something. Do you have a something? My something is cooler than yours. You think I am childish! You across the street, Do you think I am childish ...

awsome poem

i really liked the poem it was very lovely and hope to get a chance to read more of your poems.

i like the poem and i agree with the rating.

well it is a good poem. But i think it would be alot better if you add more line to it.

realy liked the poem and cant wait for more poems to read!

i realy like the poem and i think u will always be an amazing poet. I hope i get a chance to read more of your works of art

i would say gossips insted of gossip on the first line

i heard if you lightly sketch the joints first then the body shape and next the detals it works but it does not look like you need any help