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Ok, review time. :D I know that you can do better then this because I read Escaping From Hell, which was very good and I may do a review of ...

Braking things is fun. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I like how you had a scene and just wrote it out, not bothering the fact that its in the ...

Yay! More exciting writing to review! I liked this and would like to see more of it. Like I said a day or two ago, you could benefit from some ...

I have to say that you managed to keep me on the edge of my seat. I wasn't a fan of the ending because the girl in the story didn't ...

I've got a few things: 1) I think you may have posted this in the wrong form. Right now its in Action/Adventure Short Stories. If this is a prologue then ...

I can express my general opinion with a simple word problem: The sum of the uniqueness of a female gladiator and tradition fantasy elements equals pretty darn awesome. Some stuff ...

O.O This isn't what I was expecting from the title. And from this first part it looks like Unicorn Killers could be Killer Unicorns and be just as fitting. After ...

I like this. It was kind of sad, but not to the point where people would get choked up about it. If you wanted to then you could build on ...

Very interesting short story, made me think. The unmarked changes of perspective threw me for a loop but not one that I couldn't get over. You might want to describe ...

Fight the inevitable Alex! Fight it! The sleep talking was funny. The best thing that I've ever heard someone say in their sleep is "I can't find my four bristled ...

Well first off, sorry that it took me this long to get around to reading this. I was having trouble understanding this sentence: “If you want the good opinion of ...

I really liked this. Lots of danger and hints of things only partly seen. I think that the contrast between Veleska's exotic name and Ted's common one. Only two things ...