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Re: Moving here from deviantART
Welcome Super Chipmunk! When I saw your name I considered teasing you about the fact that our user names are close, but since you're new I didn't. :D (Aren't I ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: It's me.. Nathalie
Welcome Nathalie! If you feel up to some adventure and friendly conversation try checking out the Chat Room. Everyone here is friendly so don't worry about anything, We're all here ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Death of an Angel
Ok, review time. :D I know that you can do better then this because I read Escaping From Hell, which was very good and I may do a review of ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Hello. I'm new. And I want to be known.
Hello! :D I took a look at your blog and read a few of your poems. I don't read a lot of poetry but its sometimes nice to branch out ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Good morning!
Welcome! Sounds like we have a lot in common. We both get distracted from our writing and joined YWS to help us keep focused. I have to say that all ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: The Car in the House
Braking things is fun. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I like how you had a scene and just wrote it out, not bothering the fact that its in the ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Duel
Yay! More exciting writing to review! I liked this and would like to see more of it. Like I said a day or two ago, you could benefit from some ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Unsight
I have to say that you managed to keep me on the edge of my seat. I wasn't a fan of the ending because the girl in the story didn't ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Avirkian's Light (working title) prologue
I've got a few things: 1) I think you may have posted this in the wrong form. Right now its in Action/Adventure Short Stories. If this is a prologue then ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Gladiator Girl
I can express my general opinion with a simple word problem: The sum of the uniqueness of a female gladiator and tradition fantasy elements equals pretty darn awesome. Some stuff ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Unicorn Killers
O.O This isn't what I was expecting from the title. And from this first part it looks like Unicorn Killers could be Killer Unicorns and be just as fitting. After ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: The Stuggles of Antier - Part II
Its has been a long time since I posted the first part of this, so to anyone who was waiting for more sorry. As I was writing this I realized ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever Ch. 9
I like this. It was kind of sad, but not to the point where people would get choked up about it. If you wanted to then you could build on ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: That awkward moment just before you go into a magic world.
Very interesting short story, made me think. The unmarked changes of perspective threw me for a loop but not one that I couldn't get over. You might want to describe ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 7
Fight the inevitable Alex! Fight it! The sleep talking was funny. The best thing that I've ever heard someone say in their sleep is "I can't find my four bristled ...
Jun 12, 2010
