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This was incredibly amusing. It actually reminded me a lot of those Georgia Nicholson books (not just because I can tell you're British -- if I am wrong then... I'm ...

A/N: So the plot is starting to become a little more evident in this chapter – I know it was a slow start. This is also the chapter where the ...

A/N: I really want to thank everyone who helped me with the writing of this (tapatia and captain.classy are the only people who are on yws, so I can formally ...

Hello! This was a really stunning short story. There were just a couple things I found that could use tweaking: The gravel crunched beneath the soles of my polished, black ...

Wow, what a powerful story! I really liked it, but there are some things I noticed that could use tweaking. Light rain droplets pattered on the dark pavement; each speck ...

Hello! This is kind of a trip to read -- I just graduated from high school actually. I think that there's a good foundation here, but there's room for expansion ...

This poem is so friggin great. It is great. I can see what annapapadimitriou123 was saying, but I seriously think that girls who wear those shorts are wearing them for ...

Wow, you're really quite a good writer, especially for a 14 year old! 14! There are some really good moments in this. I'm very drawn to this beautifully subtle little ...

I'm gonna go ahead and say that think that minimal description is the way to go. To me, that's really good writing, because as the reader, you're allowed to imagine ...

It really depends for me on what kind of story I'm writing. Most of my stories tend to have a basis in the real world, so I google most common/popular ...

Wow, well, first of all I was totally shocked by the ending! I definitely didn't see that coming, but it gives you a whole new perspective about the rest of ...

Not at all, I totally get what you're saying :)

A/N: This is a little short story I wrote about a character I developed in creative writing. I'll be posting other stories I wrote about him, but this is as ...

Okay so I did think there was some improvement in this draft! You did make an effort to show, but I think you could have done with leaving out the ...

Hello there! Well, I think this is a good start, that gives you a good idea of who Roselle is and what she's about. This might sound a little contrary ...