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Re: In the memory of Deryn jones
Ok, I understand that grammar isn't your strong point, but, I'll correct some little things for you, if thats alright? The "I" is always a capital if refering to yourself ...
Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:02 am -
Re: In the memory of Deryn jones
kingolions ,Cirque ,RepublicOfCoter ,Way2Dawn ,retrodisco666 ,Lydia1995 and Mr.Knightley Thank you guys for reviewing it but i have to say that English is not my mother tongue or even close to ...
Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:40 am -
Re: Try being me
Nice work but you have to work on it more
Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:23 am -
Re: Lost
Thank you and i will be careful next time , Today i started to write a new thing i hope you like it
Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:24 pm -
Re: Lost
It's ok
Thu Jun 24, 2010 11:46 am -
Re: Lost
Snoink ... thank you and please move it :P skutter11: thanks man and excuse me for my bad English because its not my mother tongue
Thu Jun 24, 2010 9:26 am