springs616

I really like this poem, and I think with a little revision it could be excellent. The topic is intriguing, and what got me to click on this poem in ...

First off, let me say that I really like the mood of the story. I always thought there was something fresh about social satire mixed with fictional supplementary information, such ...

Yeah, anima9 took it the right way. The streaks on my cheeks No one can see I wear no mascara So I cannot bleed Here, the first two lines are ...

This is an old one that I wrote around two and a half years ago, and it's pretty much what got me into writing poetry. _________________________________________________________________________________

I've been having MAJOR writer's block issues recently. It's not that I'm unmotivated and can't write--I actually feel more motivated than usual. I've written a lot of poems recently (although ...

It's great to see how much progress you've made with this in the past few months. It's excellent! The new beginning is definitely much faster and better at getting the ...

Okay, so the general story was good, but there are a lot of grammar/composition errors here which detracted from full enjoyment of the story. I'll try to mention as many ...

First of all, I would like to say that you are an awesome writer and that I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your book. Being an aspiring novelist ...

For the record, this poem is stanzaic, but I don't know how to make the spacing show up on this site. __________________________________________________________________________________________ Your vo

I like the plot of this work, and the way you set up the sequence of events to lead to the ending was well done. It seems that a lot ...

First of all, let me just say that I am in love with this story! Your satirical views on the Bush administration, as well as life in general, were fantastic, ...

I like it. For something that you just randomly thought of, it's pretty good, although usually that is how poetry works, now, isn't it? lol The only major problem that ...

They say that home is where the heart is But my heart is far away And I can't help but yearn For the nearby yesterday I miss the time when ...

First of all, I like the theme, but it seems like it would have been better suited to poetry, probably becuase of its length and the fact that it's more ...

I absolutely love it! Your writing is very good and I applaud your topic choice whole-heartedly. Keep it up :)