springs616

Okay, so I've been having some problems with my current WIP. I have a large part of the story outlined and everything, and I tried to start writing it, but ...

You could just go up to them and tell them 'please don't do it,' say that life is beautiful if you can make it through the hard parts and that ...

Once again, another good chapter, and an interesting development in the plot. I've got some corrections, as usual, but I quite enjoyed it. She’s dead. And you will be too ...

This was really good. I'm not sure if there was a time gap between this and the last chapter's writings or if you're just getting more into it, but I ...

I thought it was pretty good, overall. Here are a few little grammar nitpicks that I have: “Hey Dunbar! You lazy sack of crap do you have those sales numbers ...

She raised her eyes to look at him again. He stood a good few inches taller than her, and his shoulder-length, sandy brown hair fell slightly into his face as ...

Blast-ended skrewt! I had the non-spoken dialogue all in italics in its original format, but I didn't realize that it wouldn't transfer over the same way here. I'll go fix ...

Okay, so I have a story in mind, and it's roughly worked out, but the antagonistic creatures against which my characters are working are still a little fuzzy to me. ...

Emily Brunner stared with disgust at the figure standing before her, unable to take her eyes from its features. Its face was gaunt and nearly paper-white, its dull brown eyes ...

3/10 just because I've only ever heard of Nickleback. Sorry =/ Atrophy - The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus Here To Stay - Korn Tutenkhamen - Nightwish My Plague - Slipknot Breath ...

You know you're a writer when life is one big storybook and you constantly narrate it in your head. I did that for YEARS, and it got really old though ...

I really like the idea behind this. Anytime someone can write about something from a creative perspective, I'm on board. The writing is also pretty good, although there are a ...

Here's an oldie, about a year and a half old. Yes, I know I tend to have a complete disregard for punctuation when I write poetry, but please, overlook that ...

I like it. Lots of feelings, some inherent vagueness about it to make it universal. The only thing I'm curious about that you didn't quite clarify--facebook? Why is it dear ...

This is definitely an interesting idea, and I would love to see it brought to a short story or, even better, a novel. However, there are some problems I have ...