sportfreak13

Night arrives. Sleep embraces your mind with dreams of candy and screams. Stars position themselves in the sky. While birds tuck in their little chicks. Hunters, sneak out from hiding. ...

Hey nice poem. i liked it alot. By the way i like its about kids. Isn't it? Its really cool. I like that you use comparison.

Nice poem, views life as a game, gods little game if you will? anyway i liked the comparison. So nice job and its good. Check out my blog people, and ...

Life is there. Death lurks everywhere as a silent assassin waiting on Satans mark. Death hurdles at you, feasting upon you with content. Once it's gone, all gone, you will ...

Whoa, that's a nice poem, if you like that kind of poems, but i think you used nice vocabulary, and similies and other literary terms. i'm glad your getting better ...

Hmmm, sounds like he's not a very good boyfriend? Anyway, I liked it, the repetition was good, so was the way you described how you felt, very expressive. Keep writing. ...

Hmmm, sounds like he's not a very good boyfriend? Anyway, I liked it, the repetition was good, so was the way you described how you felt, very expressive. Keep writing.

Polish it up a bit, and its really good! I liked it cause i do the same thing in it. It was good because you were expressing yourself in a ...

Thats depressing but good, keep writing

It was depressing, sad, but super! How did you come up with that. you gotta tell me how to write like that. I love writing a reading poems. But your ...

Wow, that's a deep poem, but i liked it. Very good metaphors and words. What motivated you to write that poem? You could win, if you entered a contest with ...

Very good. I liked the golden lakes, we are dry above. It was something like that, i liked it alot. keep writing.