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I know that I need practice and what not. I also answer the qustions about the fire and Will's life and stuff, but that all happens later in the story.

William knew that he had no chance of wining the fight, but being the fool he was fought anyway. The beating was, as normal, brutal and the boys who played ...

Ok ok I was mad at a peron on this site who blackballed a thing I wrote and I was really upset and wanted revenge so i posted this and ...

This is a shout out to all those people who like being respected. I think its fair that you know that there are people on this web site that are ...

generaly just take it and go. Its moddern world and you can make up caricters ( Just know that Don eventualy learns to fly and the tall guy makes a ...

Don woke up. Normally this isn't a very uncommon thing to do for Don but this morning was strange because he was floating about 6 inches above his bed. Upon ...

i like the first three. was a little confused by the forth. did u draw those with charcle. if so i like the way u did the shdowing. i did ...

i think that if you've serusly tried to make your charicter a dynamic person and not just a charicter im reading about in a book. and you made them real ...

ya see i agree with ( ooo forget their name) whoever it was that said that it wasent snapish. pesonetly i think snape would have tried using a potion or ...

i dont claim to know alot about the tecnicle side of poety. but i think it makes us think about ourselfs. it askes the qustion where am i personly. thats ...

its really good stuff. i like the description of the charicters. i felt a little lost cuse i was thrown into the middle of a sence. like there was no ...

this is a call out for help! (call me a loser if u wish) but im in love and have trouble describing it. so all of you who are good ...

im still likein it! a little misdiscription here or ther. like your level of detail when you describe sence or people drops off once or twice and you sound like ...

well for me as a guy i dident like the 2nd person "view" very much cuse i have a hard time imagining my self as a girl. but thats just ...

i can serusly see the begining to a really sweet story! the vampire thing was/is tight. anyway the transiion from the into to her getting to the forrest was abrupt ...