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Re: Five Bars in Rome: Letter to an American Soldier
Wow. That was so amazing. You have the most wonderful ability for capturing real and honest emotion in fiction, and some people just can't do that. I felt as if ...
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Re: Callie/Bulemia
Okay, I was bored in Digital Photography today so I got on the computer and just threw this together, it's kind of random and bad, but I thought I'd post ...
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Re: deleted
Hey! Okay, I'm not going to critique your story paragraph by paragraph like Monki...I'm more about the idea behind it and the plot than the grammar. I think that it ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Powers ::4::
Wow. At first, with the whole potato and meat ration thing, I wasn't sure where you were going with it and I was like, ummm....but wow. That was really well ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: The Audition
I walk into the room Finally I have been waiting Outside In the fluorescently lit room Sitting On a cracked, vinyl chair Waiting Just waiting With a sea of kids ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Becca....
I walk through the front door and immediately know something is wrong. “Becca?” Mom calls. She appears in the doorway. Her honey colored curls are brimming with gray and the ...
Jun 10, 2008
