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This isn't really a short story but rather a possible beginning to a story. It's rough, written at 3 in the morning, and the first thing I've been able to ...

This reminds me a lot of this poem I read called I Won't Promise You Forever, or something like that. However, I thought that one was really dumb, and I ...

I have nothing bad to say.

I need something MOOOOAAAR. More. I need more. There isn't much here beyond "I'm too young for love." Show us, let us feel it or something. Do this in your ...

This. Is. Ridiculous. xD I completely hate the fact you incorporated math into a literary matter. But I also kind of dig it. Darn you. I can't really critique what ...

This is very stream-of-consciousness, very love-drunk kind of nonsense. Sorry about any grammar mistakes. I'm sure there's some in there. -_- There are a few things that I've heard about ...

I'm not really into the whole mystery, crime scene thing, so I won't critique your story. It's obivous that the people like it. n_n I'm also really picky with future ...

I don't care about capitalization. I mean, I personally would prefer capitals but oh well. It's not my poem. But I can't see the reason why you would leave out ...

I like the writing, first off. It has an easy flow which I think is priority in a poem [for me anyway n_n]. And I like the whole idea, particularly ...

This. Is. So. Freaking. Cute. n_n I really like the flow too, something others have mentioned, but they only said that because it's true. I like the way you didn't ...

Boyfriend Gatorade Fights Unbeknownst to many people, Gatorade tastes bad on purpose. Yet, this neon-hued, slimy, not-juicy-nor-watery substance that is advertised as athlete sweat, and happens to sur

Hey there :D I have to say ultimately it was a good read, and although the story line is pretty simple, putting it into poetry worked really well here. I ...

Thank you all! Baconator was right on a lot of points, which is pretty commendable considered my piece was such a short length. n_n And for the most part, I'm ...

This is certainly very simple, but I really like it. That's all I can really say about the matter. :D You can see the image, it's not smothered in big ...

[I wasn't going to post this for review, so I let someone I knew read it. He didn't like it, but he won't tell me specifically what's wrong with it. ...