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Simple. There was nothing overwhelmingly profound about the poem, but perhaps it is the simplicity that makes it so. The thing I liked was how true this was. It was ...

It's about love. Or at least maybe love, or not if it isn't after all. God, give it here But only if you want to, And let it be good, ...

Um, I approve. :D

Hello there! :D Thank you for the kind words, but just to clarify, I know exactly what you mean xD This was something of a stream of consciousness poem in ...

I don't think you need to change anything. But then maybe I'm just bad at this whole reviewing thing. :P You don't need any flowery language. You don't need to ...

Very good :D At first I was a little reluctant to find a liking to this poem when you mentioned DC shoes [I just have a thing about certain specific ...

I pulled together a few things that could really come together. Let’s just hope these things don’t fall apart because it is my life and all its little ships sailing ...

Whoa. Before beginning a new line of dialogue from a new person, start a new paragraph. Like this: "Hey Landon, how was your weekend?" Ireland called out as she saw ...

There's something tragically simple about this, so simple that something makes me love this very much. Which is weird. It's basic but there's something great about that. You maintain the ...

[Remember, this story is a stream-of-consciousness excerpt from a full story. It's deliberately abstract; besides, what's more abstract and incomprehensible that whatever it is we feel when want to hu

I don't get it, and by "it" I mean "it" but in regards to the reviews. This itself won't be a very effective review considering I'm not nitpicking or telling ...

Step one is to begin a descent into madness, at least one type of madness. This must be the first and initial descent because to fall downhill, you must at ...

I'm sorry, but I can't give a very thorough review because this is just too much like Twilight. Everything. It's just too much like Twilight. That being said, I'll try ...

I'm just going to disregard the nitpicks because, well, they're nitpicks. But ultimately I just love this piece. From a structure perspective, this was just a solid piece in my ...

Yet another piece of something [born at 3 am]. I don't even know. It comes from a project I'm working on, one that I would like to refrain from revealing ...