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That is AWESOME. I especially like the whole "I can't see you, you can't see me" thing.

The way some people can tear it out of its place And leave it lying on the dirty carpet in disgrace. I LOVED that part. I love the whole song, ...

Hmm... I'll read it out loud and see if 'dirty' works. :D Thank you for your suggestions!

Dude, you are ten days older than me. :D And ten days younger than my best friend... muaha.

This is amazing. I had a friend once, with anorexia, and this is almost exactly how I felt to watch her suffer. Great job. :)

My problems of today, won't follow in my footsteps. And new ideas will erupt, like the blast that's called a hiccup. The rhyme for that part is a bit off. ...

I love this story! You did an excellent job of writing from a girl's point of view. It's awesome! :D

"I'm tired of the world that I'm living in. I need to start a new life and begin again. I don't want to be with you anymore." With those words, ...

I REALLY like the chorus. All of the lyrics all really good, though. I like the depth of it all.

You don't write poetry, poetry writes itself and vents onto paper through your mind. Or at least that's how it is for me... I just randomly start writing, and when ...

Don't Cry Out--Shiny Toy Guns

I'm not sure how I found this site... but I know it was sometime really late last night. 0_o Anyways, I'm Spiker (well, actually my name is Saige... almost everyone ...

I like it, it's very deep and emotional, especially for someone who doesn't usually write lyrics.