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Re: The Dying Park
was it a poem? didnt seem so but nonetheless it was good and captivating. the flow between two paragraphs werent good. fix the flow bet. them otherwise it was a ...
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: Suicide
oh man who says its not good its great it has loads of impact in it it also has a nice rhythm with all those rhyming words its great. keep ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: The story of the unnamed full
hey i juz edited my prev post and made it my full story
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: The story of the unnamed full
sry guys abt da mistakes am glad i wrote da story hereyou guys are so helpfull. anyways stay tuned for the rest of the story and thnx for da editing
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Nectar of the Gods
Did you wite it yourself?
Jun 15, 2008