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Spiderman here. I'm gonna point out a nitpick. I usually don't do grammar but this one just stood out annoyingly. my birth literally made the news as it was printed ...

Wow! The start of this was professionally written. Whether or not it was scientifically accurate, I don't know. I'll leave that to Nate. I didn't like towards the middle when ...

You go to love Ben. I didn't know they were rich enough to have a maid. Alex does act younger then her age sometimes or maybe its just her absent-minded ...

I am writing this reveiw as I read it. The start of the chapter: I love how you jump straight to the story. Karla seems like a realistic nice friend ...

Spiderman here to reveiw some parts of your piece. Iwon't get into all the grammar, because that not my thing. This was pretty good. :) Your story starts out fine. ...

Yay, for a survival story. Yay, for 2012. Yay, for a disaster story. Like Jessica said you should check out Gone by Michael Grant (I read part of it and ...

Spiderman here. I will still read this even though I'm a guy and its about fashion. First of all, I would like to congratulate you. Very few stories i read ...

Rap is actaully a form of poetry, so I guess this counts. Its very short though. Btw : Not all rap has yo yo yo in it but it fit ...

I love your super hero idea (could probably tell from my name). I myself am writing a story about kids with powers however its totally different. I liked the characters ...

Interesting. I'm not one to go into any nitpicks and this piece doesn't have a lot of grammar mistakes :D . The story was pretty good and i liked how ...