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Re: The Intricate Line
A happy reviewing day to you :) I like how you sarted the poem, it's simple yet it works. I like the emotion, it's always present and it makes he ...
May 31, 2013 -
Re: Ink ~ Chapter One
A happy reviewing day to you I love this story :)Good job. I like the plot an the descriptions. I see no grammer mistakes or typos. You really go into ...
May 31, 2013 -
Re: I have nothing left now...(Chapter 1)
A happy reviewing day to you. I reall like this story. It defenitly wasn't what I expected. It isn't easy to read,like when you said: “Maybe you can clean up ...
May 31, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 4
Hey there :) what an awesome reviewing day it is today :) I like how you managed to get the descriptions of the playboy bunny type right. The story feels ...
May 30, 2013
