spencbailey

Are you a writer? Do you love writing fiction? Nonfiction? Blogging? Poetry? Journalism? Criticism? Are you a student? (High School or College) Haven't you always wanted an incredible team of ...

Should I post Chapter 2?

The liberal use of spacing in this story kills my will to read it. I disagree with the comments above saying that the cop scene was unrealistic. I like the ...

Strike the "there once was..." and study up on using semicolons. (I'm not saying I know perfectly how to use them, but I noticed many times you used a semicolon ...

Thank you very much BlueAfrica! I agree with the majority of your corrections. is "she" going to appear in any other part of the story? If so, you should probably ...

Personally, I agree with you. Critically, I think it's too much opinion without enough support. Opinion is meaningless unless you can support it with relative issues or concerns that people ...

It's called fomula fiction. You know, "happily ever after" even though you don't use those exact words. And the whole "overcome a great obstacle" theme. Many of the greatest works ...

Intriguing and provocative theme. It appears to me that you had a good idea what the story was about and how it'd start, climax, and end but you failed to ...

Preface: This isn't my "best work" and it's not even serious writing. It's more of something that I just sat down and started typing for the heck of it and ...