speciabilitator

I really enjoyed this piece; it was well-written, though with a few errors here and there ("The gawked lewdly and grinned..."), and it captured the very "tribal" feeling of the ...

Sorry I haven't added another chapter, I'm still working on it...I was on a short trip and have been busy with school and stuff. I will let you know when ...

I think you need a spell-checker. Microsoft Word really helps! And I don't mean it to be mean. I'm just trying to help. :)