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Sorry I haven't added another chapter, I'm still working on it...I was on a short trip and have been busy with school and stuff. I will let you know when ...

Chapter One I closed my eyes and rubbed them hard. I had to stop thinking about him. I had to just let him go. I got up and walked, I ...

I actually really liked that. However, I must exercise my evil teacher-ness by saying that you need to control yourself a bit in the writing area. For instance: Not like ...

I think you need a spell-checker. Microsoft Word really helps! And I don't mean it to be mean. I'm just trying to help. :)

I like it so far. I almost said it's flowing nicely, but not completely. Now, maybe it's just my imagination, but it sounds a little choppy. I get like that ...