speakingofsarah

"EXACTED REVENGE Your story is about an artist trapped in a locker borrowing a pencil. Nigel sighed. It sounded strange as the sound echoed off the sides of the tiny ...

Thanks everyone! I actually got the idea from the theme generator. This is was the original theme I was given: "Your story is about a secretary in a doctor's office ...

Awhhh :( is this about your parents? I liked this a lot. Keep your head up :) -Sarah

This has promise to it :) The only thing I'm not too sure about is the ending, it was rather flat. Can't wait to read more! -Sarah

I love this! It flowed nicely, and I really liked the ending. One nitpick I have though is.. “And!” He wasn't done, apparently. " I let those merchant miscreants go ...

I’m so sick of writer's block Can’t you see I’m already lost? Yet you stand there and mock My talent is always the cost You make me angry all the ...

The plot of this story was nice, I suppose, but it did seem a little humdrum to me. It left me wondering things that should have been in the story ...

I really like this, it's a nice idea, but i agree with MilkNCookies, you never mentioned the girls name. Also, I would have liked to see you go more in-dept ...

Please nitpick as much as possible :smt001 Your story is about a secretary in a doctor's office floating with balloons. I hate this job, I hate this office, but most ...

This is amazing! I loved the description of the wife- I thought it was strange, but it never made me think she was dead. I also loved the insanity of ...

This is such a good story! The flow was nice, and you could already get a feel for the characters. I do have a couple nitpicks though: "There was nothing ...