spartacus

So... The flow of the poem was really good. The tempo was bad in the first stanza but shot off nice after that. The rythme was good sides the first ...

The curse words are totally throwing the poem off and repetitive. The tempo is uncertain and the rythme is uneven. I like the basis of the poem but the build ...

This is a truly riveting poem and jubilant peice.The coherence and comprehensive writing is intense.The only thing I don't like is the last line and the tempo and rythme is ...

This a fantastic poem and wonderfully has rythme but a uneven tempo.The originality is great and so un-cliche.There is such a riveting style and pathetic emotion to the words.Its great ...

Wow,I really love this explains the unreturned love,empty soul,missing person in a one sided was amazing,truly.I think your tempo is off slightly but the rythme is fairly even.There is such ...

GO SKINS!!! That was fantastic! Congratulations on finishing your novel! ~spartacus~

Hehe... This is original and funny.Its different and riveting.Intensely written although not serious!Magnifiscent and hilarious! Great job! ~spartacus~ the serious person I am is on a coffee break as

Hehe... This is original and funny.Its different and riveting.Intensely written although not serious!Magnifiscent and hilarious! Great job! ~spartacus~ the serious person I am is on a coffee break as

The poem is slightly cliche but you have your origanality in there with your word choice.Truly wonderful rythme.The rhyming and tempo could not be more intense.Fantastic! WOW great job! Keep ...

The poem is slightly cliche but you have your origanality in there with your word choice.Truly wonderful rythme.The rhyming and tempo could not be more intense.Fantastic! WOW great job! Keep ...

Great~Fantastic~loving~brilliant~ I love it!Great for Mothers day! Well the rythme is a little off and the tempo isn't kept.The 3rd stanza is awkward and throws off the beat.The poem lacks ...

I know its not a fantastic title^^ we had a dream of ruling all the seven seas the dream was fought for and we lost her the beautiful dream the ...

Well... First of all I would like to say that I have been there and I am sorry.I hope you see that we understand and alot of people have gonethrough ...

So... Well lets start with what I liked.I liked the rhyming and the tempo was fairly smooth.The concept was built and I like the mystery.Its like I don't know wether ...

I liked the poem had a depth that shows how questions go really portrayed the emotions of rejection and how we wonder why.I think the "is it because you didnt ...