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hey thanks jessie i sing too yea :) this rap is intended for a acoustic guitar backing rather then a typical rnb beat :)

wow if this is just a doodle i cant imagine what you would draw if you sat down and focused on something it kind of reminds me of indian dress ...

lol wow i didnt realise that people were so narrow minded and predjudice HIPPIES RULE :D haha and if any of you go to leeds fest or reading festival you ...

i love your photos! as above my knowledge isnt that good with photos but: - there all beautifull - i disagree with people saying dust the piano , i think ...

hello :) first of all. :) i reeeeeeaallly like what you have so far it has some meaning. but i personally think you have just scratched the surface , you ...

hey thank you for the review i do have alot of errors with in spelling etc due to that being my first draft so yea lol i do need to ...

wow i really like the way that everythings listed it makes me think of the drunk driver not knowing what is happening around him because everything is going too fast ...

hey everyone :) would really apreciate it if you reviewed this piece once you have read it thank you :) you will also find it on i wrote this ages ...

My soul and heart dance in harmony to the sound of love Running through my veins Passions of fire burn with desire For you to be in my arms loving ...

dude :) its your main man sparky im looooving the play (as you already know) but i want you to put a copy up of your newest creation because ill ...

hey im like uber new to this site and to writing for that matter i write poems,lyrics, plays and would like feedback on everything i post pleeeease :) lol some ...

hey hey :) i am also a newbie and i call my self a poet/play write/ song writer ...infact ..i just call my self a writer in general lol im ...

hey everyone i was just wondering if you could all help me and review my work ill be putting up another 2 plays in the next week or so and ...

hey all if you read my play can you pleeeeaaaase leave me some feedback positive and negative ive just started writing my own plays and i have many that im ...

I don’t need to dream the dream cos that’s what im living got my future in my sight , money and lotsa women but whos to say that , this ...