southerngirl5379

Thanks!

Its knd of hard to understand. I couldnt really follow what was going on in the story. I like your writing style, if you tweaked it a little i think ...

That was really good it may be a little cliche but its not completely over used.

that was awesome! it was a little jumpy but it was exactly where it needed to be.

An earthquake erupted through my dream world. My eyes snapped open and I threw whoever was shaking me across the room, and I pinned the person to the wall to ...