soupertramp

Usually, I jump excitedly when the writer tells me where they are, and who they are. When you mentioned that you are in Germany, it sounded almost too...predictable. Cliche. Research ...

Wow. I really liked this--it kind of sounds like something a protagonist should say at the end of a movie. You're style of writing really makes an impact--it's perfectly blunt.

The air is cool, hanging in sheets over a quiet field, doing well in hiding your carefully positioned body. There is a shout in the distance, a crack even farther ...