songbird102

Great! It was a perfect and sweet poem. Short and sweet. I loved it and would love to give you points for it. I won't though because my points are ...

I love the title. I love the fact that you would do that to the title of a post and that is a good way of telling that you care ...

Good job. For those who like a twist in their song, everyone will like this piece. The words were great and I think I would give your overall song a ...

Great piece of writing that you have made and that is fantastic what you have done with it. I loved the piece and it touched my heart so deep that ...

Yeah thanks! I'll try to change that, but in the mean time I need to write a story.

The overall story is fantastic but sometimes the words get jumbled and it get's hard to understand. The overall qualities of the book are great and I think you could ...