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Hmmm...well, it seemed completely unconnected to the first bit, but it was still good. I'm an opera singer, so it was really fun and interesting for me to read, because ...

Hey there! I realize you posted this a long time ago, but chapter two is more recent and I had to read this first anyway. The other people got most ...

Hey there! I really loved this piece. It wasn't flawless, as the person above me pointed out, but it was still very engaging, kept your interest to the very end, ...

Oh my goodness, Angel, that was so sad! Was it about the witch hunts in Massechusetts, or was it just a fiction type thing? Either way, a brilliant work. But ...

Hey there! First of all, I just have to say that this is written a little bit like a science project or something. DON'T put slashes between your words to ...

Hey, thanks for the PM! I've been taking a vacation from this site for awhile, so I'm still trying to find my sea legs again, so to speak. A very ...

This looks really good, but where is chapter one??? Pm me a link (if there is one) and I'll read it. I realize you said you wanted us to be ...

Hey there! First of all, I was a little confused - I thought it was a little too quick. You didn't develop Sam's character at all. The only thing we ...

Hey, pretty good! I really don't have any new critiques with this chapter. Just that one sentence problem that I see consistently throughout all your chapters...it's like you're not sure ...

Well, I'm a Senior, dears, and believe me, it's not all it's made out to be! You're still a teenager, and you still have wildly sporadic bursts of hormones. :wink: ...

Lol, Chaotic, I just went to your profile. "Life was so simple when boys had cooties..." LOVE IT!!! *ehem* Yes, well, here I am, once again. It's nice to be ...

I would suggest rated 'R' for language and mature content. I read stuff rated pg-13, but I wouldn't read this story. No offense, the writing was great, but I don't ...

Hey, Emily? Or are you the oracle? Or Emily and the Oracle? Anyway, thanks for the pm. Here I am! Okay, nasty critique first, then I'll praise and gush later, ...

She knew very well what he was, a bastard. Lol, that was truly funny. I'm really sorry, but I don't have time for a full, line to line critique as ...

Okay, good chapter! Good! And believe me, you don't have to wait to post your other chapters...I don't think I could bear the tension! If this was a book I'd ...