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Hi everyone! Thank you so much for all your comments, and support. It means a lot to me and I appreciate you all taking the time to read it and ...

Aahhh, I see now :D Hmmm, okay I think that needs to be much clearer because when I read it, it sounded like the same situation reversed i.e. Micah turned ...

I woke up screaming, with tears running down my face. Ever since that day, I have been getting nightmares [no comma needed] about it. It’s the same thing everyday . ...

Hey scasha! Thank you so much for reviewing this, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D What you edited sounds so much better so thank you! And have a good christmas ...

I looked down at my own shorts and tried to pull them down more so the back of my legs wouldn’t stick to the seat. Whoever invented short shorts obviously ...

Hey everyone! Thanks so much for taking the time to recommend books I really appreciate it! I think I might get him 'Reach for the Sky' but I'll definatly recommend ...

It's funny you should mention that one because that's the one I was going to get him but then someone told me that he already read it :( Thank you ...

I got confused there-what does the two sizes too small mean? or the part about the tourqoise fifties. It doesn't make sense to me. A 'number' is like a way ...

Hello again! Okay, the spelling errors which I thought I noticed turned out to be right after all so just ignore that, it was me mis-reading! :D I noticed that ...

I was happy to :D Let me know if and when you post your redreaft, I'd love to read it. PM or something :D I actually only have one piece ...

stella- ye that part of the plot was a bit weird but i still think it added to the book because the whole thing i thought was pretty strange but ...

oooh theres going to be more chapters? :D pm me or something when you post them dso i can come and read!

personally i read most of my books a few times if i really like them but i think you should definatly read it again, i really liked it! it was ...

thank you all for the critiques! when i actually wrote this it wasnt intended to be an abstract piece it just sort of ended up that way but i think ...