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I have about a hundred and one questions about this piece! One of which Aet Lindling already asked and anyway I wont ask all of them since they aren't really ...

I really admire you for putting this story up here. I'm so so sorry for what happened to you- there's no way I can even begin to understand what it ...

Hey! Ok im finally getting round to reviewing this now i have my internet back properly! Alright.. This hooked me a lot more. It was interesting and made me want ...

You had some very good use of repetition here. That's usually something that's very hard to master without it becoming monotonous and over-used but you did it exceptionally well here, ...

This was very good indeed. The emotions were done very well and I think any nit-picks i found have already been covered. I'll second jasmine, I quite want to know ...

Hi there! Alright, overall, I liked this a lot. It was a lovely idea and it was all written very well, there were just one or two things I noticed... ...

Alright, I read your other piece 'Epiphany', and then saw this one with the title 'Love' thinking it would be a bit less like your previous piece. I was wrong. ...

Okay, well I liked this...I think, despite all the cynicism, however, I wasn't too sure what the point of it was? Is this something which you, personally, believe/think or is ...

Hello! Well firstly, I noticed a few spelling and grammatical errors so maybe go back and read through it? Hmm okay, well I liked the way you wrote this, your ...

Okay, I'm going to take a wild guess that you've read The Book Theif?? I would be very very surprised if you haven't because this was exactly like the first ...

Cade: I actually really liked The Other Boleyn Girl. I thought it was very interesting, I enjoyed it a lot. I quite like historical stuff. I'm a bit of a ...

Hey jones! I really liked your subject matter here. I loved the way you had the pathway to heaven (I'm assuming heaven) as uneven in contrast to the other smooth ...

Hey Angel Of Death! I liked this a lot. I loved the subject matter and thought you did very well with portraying his Ayal's character. I also like the way ...

You should have reviewed two other works before posting your own- it makes sure everyone gets reviews and it makes people more willing to review your work. Secondly- I have ...

Ok i know we're supposed to give constructive critiques but, wow... This was really really great I couldn't find anything at all to critique. I love your last line. It ...