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Oops! I forgot one last thing I was gonna address! Your title isn't compelling, it's very ordinary. I think you should rename it to something that will attract more people ...

Yay! Cookie Monster is in this one! Yet again, this never ceases to make me laugh. But in a good way(:

Oh gosh, problems seem to be brewing in Sesame Street! Damn that Abby Cadabby, she's not even from the original cast of sesame street, I would feel insulted if I ...

Alright, listen just because I'm not experienced in poems, doesn't mean that I'm a dumbass and don't know a thing. I have reviewed poems before, I was just saying that ...

It is a cute little poem, your point came across well. I would have liked to hear more about the dance but seeing as it only lasted two minutes, brevity ...

thank you all very much, I have taken into account everything and it was quite helpful. I intended for the dream boy to be a bit mysterious, see the Main ...